Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 20 August 2014

Making spinach dip

IALT write a procedure about making spinach dip
- I put my recipe in order
-I used words that tell you the ingredients for the spinach dip.
-I have used words for what is next for in story.














Tuesday, 20 May 2014

Making a Plan

I am learning to make a plan. This is my Small Moments plan. I remembered ideas in my head and then I put them in the plan. My story matches my plan. I used the words from my plan in my story.

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In the holidays I went to see the lego movie

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I felt happy when I saw the movie.
In the holiday I was excited because I was going to see the lego movie.  I went with my mum, dad and sister.  We ate popcorn, lollies, chips and ice cream.  It was fun.  The movie was a little funny. I wanted to see the lego movie so I was happy that we went.   



Thursday, 20 March 2014

Fullstops and capital letters


I am learning to write the fullstops and the capital letters in the right place.  I can some times put my fullstops in the wrong place and some times I can put it in the right place.  If I make a mistake my friend will help me.  I will read my story to a friend so I am correct and my sentences makes sense.